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Tuesday, November 3, 2009

3ºESO Self portrait, a writing


My friend Hannah is 18 years old. Hannah is very tall. She is much taller than me! She is slim and good-looking. She has long, straight, blond hair and blue eyes. She has a lovely smile too.

Hannah has a heart of gold, but she is normally quite a shy person. However, she is chatty and confident with her friends and family. She works very hard at school, and she likes studying English and science best. She loves the outdoors and she wants to be a sports instructor when she is older. In her free time she is always at the beach!

Hannah lives in a different town, but we try to meet at least once a month. She is very good at writing long, funny emails! I speak to her on the phone nearly every week, and we discuss all our problems. I think Hannah is a great listener. Although I don't see Hannah as often as I would like to, she is a very good friend.

My big sister Hannah is 18. She's very tall and she's as thin as a rake. She has got blond hair and she is almost pretty, but she's too skinny!

Mum says that Hannah is shy, but I think she's bossy! Sometimes she looks after me when mum and dad go out, and she's always telling me what to do! However, she can be kind, and she is sometimes very funny. Hannah works much harder at school than me, but I'm better than her at maths. She hates maths!

At home, Hannah is always on the computer, or the phone, which is annoying. On the other hand, she helps me with my homework sometimes. We get on fairly well most of the time! All in all, I think she's a pretty good sister.

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