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Monday, January 11, 2010

Scary Christmas holidays


It was Christmas Day and John was enjoying his Christmas gifts at the time when the earth shook. His parents went to the window to see what was happening amd they saw it was an earthquake.

Instantly John and his parents left the house and went away as far as possible so that they would not have any problem. Suddenly, they realized that John was not there. His father was running home to see if he was there, but he didn't look for all possible sites.

Finally, John's father had a look in the hut over a small tree that was about to break. John told his father that he was afraid and he wanted everything to be over. They both left the tree house before it collapsed.

In the end, when everywhere was safe, they went to his grandparents' home in the city and told them what happened.

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